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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-07-26 07:29 AM

perhaps you didn't realize it then
when you said bite me
and then offered that diamond smile

as you turned and just waited there
as if you were game to be prey
and I was really a carnivore

becoming insatiable by your menu
that I would devour you
til there was nothing left but wet

and then I would sip you
and then lick you and lap you
and finally drink you dry

and from your lovely skin then
I would fashion a satchel for you
to carry my heart away in

perhaps you didn't realize or did you?

__________

daark

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2011-07-26 07:50 AM

LOL! Pure Daark......

I've had many offer that phrase to me but none invited those thoughts in my mind! I suppose that's why you are you, Stranger.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-07-26 08:23 AM

No, I don't think she had that in mind, daark, when she made that offer. But then, it is possible, there are plenty of masochistic females roaming the streets. Like this.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2011-07-26 09:42 AM

Deer....it was the smile just before she turned around and stood there that gave it all away...thanks guy.

____________

JP...I do get my share of the other versions too...usually after I extend a middle finger to a woman driver that is putting on makeup and eating a burrito at the same time while straddling the fast lane and the slow lane..

thanks guy

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-07-27 03:07 PM

Nothing gets by our Dark Carnivore, not even a smile.
Watch out! smiles,
ebonygirl

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-07-27 03:13 PM

Thanks ms ebony. You smile me.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-07-27 03:29 PM

Nothing can get in the way of a good smile, hey D?
And of course, this one left me grinning, diamonds and all.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-07-27 03:56 PM

Sweet sin. Whoops I mean sun. Thanks lady for the smile.

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

8 posted 2011-07-28 02:17 AM

Got to love this one, fine writing, Dark.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2011-07-28 02:21 AM

Maybe that's exactly what she had in mind. If it wasn't, I am sure she forgot what had been on her mind.

Love this.
Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2011-07-28 07:09 AM

prasad, thank you amigo

__________

lil ms ali-san, thank you for putting on the big girl eyes here...

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

11 posted 2011-07-28 01:52 PM

This one hurts with bitterness...or am I reading it right....I've been there....and am figuring out how to do that....nice one as usual...

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2011-07-28 01:55 PM

Ms king

No bitterness only better......a playful tempting exercise. Thanks lady.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

13 posted 2011-07-28 07:27 PM

Your words and responses made me shake my head and laugh~~

M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2011-07-31 10:44 PM

Enjoyed...really nice title...James

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2011-07-31 10:54 PM

All I can say to this one is..hot dang!! Have to love a dangerous man.

*innocent smile*

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

16 posted 2011-08-01 05:56 AM

Ms Marilyn

Danger is my business. Thanks lady

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

17 posted 2011-08-01 05:59 AM

MMs thanks for the shaking stuff lady.

___________

James thanks bromigo

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

18 posted 2011-08-01 01:11 PM

You are an original bad boy you are! Loved this one, and think it is one of the best I have read from you.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

19 posted 2011-08-01 01:56 PM

Thank you ms Myst. You do bless me.

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