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Open Poetry #47

brim of lotus

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-07-25 08:05 AM

you brought me some of your special healing
in that sin colored container of yours
with just a little more dosage than suggested
to make me want to overdose daily

you said my lips looked a little thirsty too
and would I mind you flavoring them
using something you had used often before
when your own hunger needed soothing

there were so many things you could do
to help me with my most recent afflictions
but you said the treatments were lengthy
and there were no promises of a cure

and you mentioned that on some occasions too
you heard your special things were addicting
and I should know if you had me down there
right under the middle of your spell

I would be ridden wet and pressed hard
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daark (forbidden series)

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-25-2011 09:04 AM).]

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-07-25 09:35 AM

Hope they never find a cure for this ailment. Very sultry smooth, Mr. D.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-07-25 09:42 AM

Ms Ali-san thanks little one. I do hope it is a chronic condition too.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2011-07-25 03:40 PM

GULP... Nicely written Dark.
Ms. Ebony

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-07-25 03:53 PM

Ms ebony

Your gulp is a smile. Thanks

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-07-26 10:56 AM

sizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzllllllllllllliiiinnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggg!!

You make me need a cigarette and I don't smoke! *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-07-26 11:05 AM

ms suthern...I do have a 2 hour cigar handy....thanks lady!!

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