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Word Weaver
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since 2011-03-06
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California, USA

0 posted 2011-07-23 04:46 PM




She sits in her garden of yesterdays
listening for the crunch of gravel
beyond the bend in the road.

A hat with ribbons fading
shielding her face
her hands resting in her lap
and she waits and listens.

The birds singing in the orchard
go unheard. She hears only
the swish of tires on the highway
below the hill where she
resides, in a fortress from the world.

Each evening she prepares
a dinner with care for two
and eats alone reading his letters
over and over the pages worn.

When she's able she sleeps
her last thought of the day, her prayer,
maybe tomorrow passers by
won't see her sitting in the garden
waiting and listening.




© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
1 posted 2011-07-23 07:04 PM


Your poem touched my heart Word Weaver.
Thank you,
Ebonygirl

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-07-23 07:23 PM


Sad poem, very much so, Marcia. I hope the lady in the poem will wake up one morning soon and look to the dawning of the new day as an omen to finish the rest of her life looking forward, rather than backward.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
3 posted 2011-07-25 07:53 AM


Paints stressful picture of that person, hope keeps everyone alive. Fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

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