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to hold you |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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to hold you in my arms, my dear to kiss your lips so sweet to hear your heart beat next to mine would be pure ecstacy but while a moment's pleasure with you would be divine it could never be worth the pain we would be sure to find though sometimes my heart is heavy i have said goodbye to misery for our friendship is a precious thing and a friend you have indeed There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
A sweet-sour kind of poetry here, faith. The reader is informed that the history of the once lovers wasn't such a good thing in the long run. Still, sometimes, deep in the night . . . Desire is rampant. ~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
so true, my friend, so true...thanks for the read and your comments! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
good write faith! Lori |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Indeed. Love the positive ending! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
You are like a fountain of poems great work. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you all for your wonderful remarks! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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