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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2011-07-11 08:57 AM



I was driving down PIP way, in my RMW, while having nakdthoughts of the Sunshine and the SEA.  Balladeer was playing ILoveTheRain, but, since I’m driving a convertible and drinking a Margherita, I didn’t need rain, I needed a secondhanddreampoet to enhance my whimsical thoughts.

I slammed on the brakes barely missing as a Dark Stranger, obviously paying no attention at all while carrying an icebox, slowly crossed the street.  Angel4aKing was following behind, picking up the fallen ice, while mumbling something about her loose Amberzlynnc bracelet which was evidently trying to fall off her wrist.  Had I not had my head in the clouds with Earth Angel and eminor_angel, I would not have come so close to such A Beautiful Disaster … it was not easy1

Finally, I got safely to Misty Lilacs and parked next to a Duck1946 Juju.  I haven’t seen one of those since JamesMichael ran into one ‘cuz the road was bslicker than OwlSA.  He jumped out, dropped to his knees, invoked Novus_Os and did 10 faithmairee and a jwesley just in case!  Of course it was during Marchmdness, so he had an excuse, according to D. Lester Young who was with me at the time.

You can never tell when an Interloper will start a Decaflame which requires the services of Dr. Love or, possibly, Dr.Moose1  So let’s all thank the Lady In White for being so blessed and don’t let the Tiersdin get on Martie or her Kit McCallum … and please don’t mistake EmmaRose for Goldenrose or you’ll never get your belt buckle polished!

Yours ‘til the callalily comes out of the passing shadows and becomes your legacy…

The Tall Texan

Poet, said my Muse to me, look into thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2011 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2011-07-11 09:08 AM




Too, too cute...
it's so good to see you back
and in such fine form!


Nan
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2 posted 2011-07-11 09:19 AM


The sights on PiP Way are always fine to see..


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2011-07-11 11:01 AM


cool stuff interloper...
Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2011-07-11 02:24 PM


Lol, I'm sure that was as much fun to write as it was to read.
Doc

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5 posted 2011-07-11 03:42 PM


You were just the "pick-me-up" I needed today~~~

thankyou


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6 posted 2011-07-11 04:00 PM


Opened up the Icebox, grabbed a cold one and read this with a Sy...

Thanks for the fun, 'loper

Martie
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7 posted 2011-07-11 06:37 PM


I really enjoyed this, Interloper...thanks for the smile.  We have had some fun here!
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8 posted 2011-07-11 08:21 PM


cute
Margherita
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9 posted 2011-07-12 08:37 AM


Very cute, dear Interloper! So good to welcome you back to the blue pages!


Love,
Margarita

Interloper
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10 posted 2011-07-12 10:01 AM


Thank you all.  It's good to be back.

Now, all I have to do is knock off the rust from my already limited poetic skills :-)

Poet, said my Muse to me, look into thy heart and write.

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11 posted 2011-07-12 12:12 PM


love this, and you

say a prayer for SEA though

Juju
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12 posted 2011-07-12 09:40 PM


Fun read.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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13 posted 2011-07-13 12:37 PM


Just love this fun read, Interloper.
                              Ida

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14 posted 2011-07-13 10:47 AM


The doctor is in the house! *S* And that's a sight for these sore eyes. *S*
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