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Open Poetry #47
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ritualbustander
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since 2011-07-09
Posts 10
Alberta, Canada
0 posted 2011-07-10 12:59 PM

as empty as a starless night
flickers like a final light
shines brightest before it fails
and then disappears behind the veil
of flawless black strewn out across
the emptiness of all that's lost
a wind has come to snuff my light
as I slowly drift into twilight
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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2011-07-10 01:22 AM

Very beauitiful.  I look forward to reading the next poem that you have posted.

Welcome to PiP.  I really hope you enjoy it here as much as I have.

Alison
ritualbustander
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since 2011-07-09
Posts 10
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2011-07-10 01:56 AM

Thanks for your encouraging comments Alison. Those are those some cute Moose types you shared in your one post. Happy writing and reading!
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