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Martin and Venetia |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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MARTIN AND VENETIA 27 June 2011 Thunder called, lightning compelled, and destined to be drawn but never collide, they were mostly too far to melt, too near for safety. Owl |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Caught in the middle of should I, or shouldn't I. hmmm everyone has been there. I wonder what happened after the storm passed? |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Well, Ford, the storm only abates for a short while and then the safety is gone and there is a melting of both Martin and Venetia, but then the storm starts up again and they are again repeatedly drawn together then flung apart. Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (06-30-2011 12:36 PM).] |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Duck and cover if they ever do get close to each other. It's going to be a life-changing event. I really like this, Diana, and am enjoying the poetry that you are sharing. You are very good. Alison |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, I do and will, Alison. Thank you for your warm words. Owl |
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