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rad802
Member

since 2008-04-19

Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2011-01-17 12:55 PM

Moment stalls, your vision fading
Beyond the veil, three figures waiting
Senses blend to infinite
As all the pieces reconnect

Every choice will fall or rise
Uniting truth, dissolving lies
Purpose can not be ignored
Could punishment be your reward

No rule you learned can be applied
No possibility denied
You're nowhere and you're everywhere
Your stillness lying close beside

Colored song of whispered breath
A swirling sky of loveliness
As rising peace now covers you
And all you were will now renew
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Reasons revolve and lightly touched they softly shimmer
Monumental precepts to oasis
Thoughtlessly the will dissolves the tiny fortunes
And returns to darkened alleys, ergo stasis

Hollow impetus ignores the light of dawn
The waking lingers as it blends the last sensations
Now fast forward till the evening stars are drawn
Bleeding out before us, shifting constellations

Some hurt removed the restless pace of silent living
Indulgent injuries becoming less neglected
Blindly lust perfumed anonymous occasions
Preferred but never valued or expected

Weary consciousness exhausts the light of day
The worker struggles till he meets his expectations
Now fast forward till the stars are pushed away
Bleeding out before us, shifting constellations

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-01-17 02:15 PM

I loved the imagery in this piece. I could picture all this happening. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2011-01-17 10:11 PM

Hey~~ Have missed your music radman~
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Colored song of whispered breath
A swirling sky of loveliness
As rising peace now covers you
And all you were will now renew
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That's so nice. Stick around would ya!!

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