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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-06-24 10:37 AM

The full moon's bright
caught the highlights
in her waist length hair
A midnight breeze
gently lifted locks
here and there
to expose her bare
to the moonbeams
that kept her company
that night
She stretched out
to look at the sky above
Then she shut her eyes
to dream about making love
under the starry skies
of a night like this

LGR(C)6/24/11

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-06-24 10:39 AM

Beautiful. Glad I am hanging out a bit this morning and could read this one.

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-06-24 10:42 AM

I'm glad you could too! Thanks for being here, glad you like it and let me know.
ox Lori

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2011-06-24 06:20 PM

Lori - I could feel the rapturous embrace of the moment with the visual impact of the stars above indicating the talent of your poet's pen to transcend the reader. Thanks for the sensation and the trip. Much enjoyed. Namyh

AmyLynn
New Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 4
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2011-06-25 05:37 PM

The more I read, the more I like...no...LOVE your poetry. They need an Angel Icon...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-06-26 06:00 PM

Namyh-Hey I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Makes me feel good that you let me know

AmyLynn-Wow! What a compliment! Thank you very much! You'll figure out how to post...I can't wait to read you. And you'll like posting here at the "Blue Buffet"
Lori

ThatOneGuy
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 33
Indiana, United States

6 posted 2011-06-27 11:50 PM

This is a great piece, I like it alot!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2011-06-28 11:17 AM

Poetical love poetry with your very unique stamp on it.

~ Man who wants pretty nurse, must be patient. ~

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

8 posted 2011-06-28 11:22 PM

Beautiful!!! Love it!
Kat >^..^<

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

9 posted 2011-07-02 10:36 PM

Dreamy.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

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