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Open Poetry #47

jewels of gravel rode

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-06-20 08:27 AM

shiver songs seep slow
from the dark wood of windows
with night still dancing behind

the pale skin woman moans
like a violin from her belly well
bow across arousal drawn

she begs for arrows to enter
and puncture a target hidden
so she can be rivering again

love is something broken within
never glued, but fitted careful
so asunder can be savored slowly

now she says, and again forever

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daark (yes rode is spelled correctly..)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-06-20 10:35 AM

love is something broken within
never glued, but fitted careful
so asunder can be savored slowly

now she says, and again forever

~*~

Yes, rode is spelled correctly...

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-06-20 11:12 AM

Must be the gravel from my stone tablet, huh. (grins) And what? You have people emailing you to check your spelling? Where are these little spelling gnomes when I need them? Lusting after you? Huh?

Okay, I love it and you know I do. But some things are worth repeating again ... and again .. and again.

Yep.
Ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2011-06-20 11:20 AM

Ms Sun..thank you lovely one for the eyes and smile here.

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Ms Ali-san, yep...that little guy that writes fortune cookie novels spell checks my smell checker..thanks little one

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-06-21 05:04 AM

quote:
shiver songs seep slow
from the dark wood of windows
with night still dancing behind

Such an ouverture to your "jewels of gravel rode", which evolves in a crescendo of images and emotions that would make any audience hold its breath ... and a final emission of a lingering sigh .... ahhhhhhhhh!

Standing ovation!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-06-21 06:20 AM

ms mar...thank you for standing...and your pen applause, I appreciate you

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