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Take My Heart
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Take My Heart |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Take my heart with you when you go Hold it close to yours so it won't know you're gone My head knows you won't be long My body doesn't care it can wait as long as it takes But my heart doesn't want to be anywhere without you So take my heart with you when you go LGR(C)6/6/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aww, ain't that cute? I think so. ~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jerry, cute is good! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love it Lori. Cute stuff! Had to write a little chorus because it sang to me....smile... Take my heart with you when you go Don't leave it here where it's cold Keep it warm out on the road Bring it back and make it glow. G Eminor Bminor7th D Flows right along too...... Have a good one. Eric |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Eric! You put my words to music!!!! Finally at long last! Bless your heart  woohoo! It is a dream come true! My next dream is to hear my words put to music. Way cool, I'm tickled to death. Lori |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Just lovely and romantic, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i think this is my new favorite of yours now...romantic and simply great, Lori Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
achingly romantic write...nicely done |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely thoughts, dear Lori, expressed very skillfully as always. I take it the "heart" can be fragmented, so you too can carry a piece of his with you and feel "whole" contemporaneously. Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My dear friend, I think that request is a "given"...   I miss you! |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
... and Lori, Thank you for the gift of your heart. I I hold it with me. And, no, it won't be long! |
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