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Open Poetry #47

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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2011-06-05 11:33 PM

Clouds are gone,
A sunny day waits outside,
Days are long
And too hot,
But the heat I can abide,
Cold forgot
Where’s the chill
Where’s the cool dark that I crave,
Gone until
The sun goes
Back into its nightly grave,
No wind blows
It’s sweltering hot outside.

Gloom

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2011-06-06 01:43 AM

Hi Professor, Glad to see your back. I always enjoy your writing and watch for your name.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-06-06 04:48 AM

It's thanks to the Light/sunlight that you are still able to enjoy your darkness

But the sun doesn't allow us to look at it in the blue sky, only the far away suns/stars give us this pleasure in the night ...

And what a pleasure it is! You are right.
Enjoyed your poem.

Love,
Margherita

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