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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * Life is something grand unseen forces steer you through trust is required * * * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice senryu. Trust is required, but hope is alive. ~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl beans ms mar...enjoyed the graphic here and the photo too. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Jerry. Yes ... Hope keeps us alive trust allows to move forward daring step by step Thank you, dear D.. Water=life ... the dewdrop symbolizes so well the miracle of life I think. Where do we come from? Life is a spellbinding gift divine mystery Love and have a great day both. Margherita  [This message has been edited by Margherita (06-01-2011 12:48 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, dear Margherita!!! |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Trust and faith o yes. The unseen but known. Such good thoughts here |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is really good...James |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Life is indeed grand, for the most part, Margherita...but some parts are not so grand...it is then, when the unseen forces seem to be steering you crooked, that the last line comes into the spotlight..yes, trust (faith) is a huge requirement. Excellent use of the form, I enjoyed reading it. Come read to me some poem, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Martie, for your loving comment. Thank you, dear EmmaRose, I enjoyed your reply. Yes we intuitively know! Dear James, thank you so much for appreciating my thoughts. Dear Ford, thank you so much for your loving comment. I believe Life is always grand, but our experience of our Path through it can be quite dramatic of course. I mean LIFE is a miracle, its origin, its evolution ... Love, Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery both poetic and photographic ! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Bruce, for your loving comment. Life sings all day long: harmonious tunes echo throughout Universe Love, Margherita |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Margherita-You have an amazing ability to match your wonderful work with the perfect picture to illustrate your poems. Are you the photographer as well as the poet? I had one of those grand days where someone did something so kind for me that it made my eyes tear up. The amazing part was that they did it anonymously so I am not certain who did it. A similar thing occurred in my life just a few short months ago. I decided that since I couldn't thank the person myself, I would thank God and ask him to bless the person who gave me the gift. Thank you for sharing your wonderful work with us. You are an amazing poetess. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Faith, thank you so much for your endearing comment. And thank you for sharing your beautiful experience. The blessings are a wonderful form of gratitude! Life shares many wondrous gifts in many forms and ways, no doubt. I adore taking pictures myself, but sometimes I don't have the right one. This one is not by me, didn't find the author's name. Sometimes it takes me more time to find the right picture than to write the poem. Also because usually those I really like are too big or unavailable for downlaod.Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You certainly know how to match beauty with beauty, Margherita. What a magical poem. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Ida, for your kind appreciation! Love, Margherita |
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