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Open Poetry #47
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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California
0 posted 2011-01-16 01:21 AM

I give you your request
Let me show you if this will work
I want to take you on a date
My dreams speak to me
Your the only thing i got
You make me a fool for you
Can i take you away?

Let me show you a bright light
The stars in the sky can save us
My heart sings heavy at the end of the night
You have just misunderstood
Your hand is the right way
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mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
Posts 198
1 posted 2011-01-16 08:59 AM

great poem enjoyed reading your work
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
2 posted 2011-01-16 10:30 AM

Awesome poem!!! You let your feelings flow.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb
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