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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-05-29 02:44 PM




Through Julia's Eyes

She’s become a part of my days
sitting there on the bench
in the shade by the fountain.
She doesn’t see the trash piled up by the refuse can
she only sees the birds pecking for scraps
and she shares her lunch with them;
simple fare carried in a brown paper bag
which she folds and puts back into her pocket.
She watches as the couples go by hand in hand
and I know she’s thinking of when her’s were warmed
by the gentle touch of a long ago lover.
Serenity is what you see on her face.
Time has robbed her of her youth
but given her wisdom and memories in return;
a lifetime showing through in placid compliance.
The children see her, call her name, and run to greet her
she speaks and they laugh and she laughs with them.
She smiles at passers by who barely give her a glance.
Ready to depart she waves at the tree squirrels
then smiles at the mid-day sun.
With the dignity of one who has lived long enough
to see the beauty in all things she departs
down the lane from whence she came.
Calm of spirit, infusing the day with her grace.
I find the world to be a wonderous place,
when seen through Julia’s eyes.

© Marcia Miller-Twiford



© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2011-05-29 04:46 PM


Beautifully written and deeply poignant, dear Marcia.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
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2 posted 2011-05-29 04:52 PM


Yes, Beautifully written my friend.

j.

Word Weaver
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3 posted 2011-05-29 04:59 PM


Margherita and JWesley, I thank you from the heart. Julia is a real person by the way. I had to write about her. She's one of those people who makes a difference just being present in your day.


Marchmadness
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4 posted 2011-05-29 05:14 PM


Bless you and Julia, Marcia. This is a wonderful poem. I will be keeping this one.
                             Ida

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-05-29 05:32 PM


Julia reminds me of someone we called The Salad Lady when I lived in Hollywood. Quite a person. I need to work something up on her.

I thoroughly enjoyed spending a little time with Julia, Marcia, you brought her to life for me. thank you for doing that.

~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~

OwlSA
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6 posted 2011-05-29 05:39 PM


I love this just as much the second time around.  It is a masterportrait, Marcia.

Owl

Word Weaver
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7 posted 2011-05-29 05:57 PM


Second time around? Whoops! My bad.


OwlSA
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8 posted 2011-05-29 06:02 PM


Nope!  Your "good" (lol)!  Marcia, we all often repost - and of all your exquisite poetry, this is a particular beauty!

Owl

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2011-05-29 11:02 PM


When seen through Julia's eyes and shared by your pen...wonderful...James
Word Weaver
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10 posted 2011-05-30 12:55 PM


Mahalo you James. Hawaii - ahhhh, I lived in Kailu Kona for three years. Am going back to stay when fate smiles on me again.
Aloha


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