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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-05-13 12:25 PM


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A perfunctory
Wave of the hand

In return
What now seems
An all too extended greeting

This is the way
Beginnings whimpering
End these days

There is at last
An empirical efficiency
As pre-determines conclusions
Before the usual waste of time

No dates bad movies
No uncomfortable trying
To find what cannot be found

The sun at dawn
Lighting a room
The carpeted floor

No sparrows
Attempting to sing
Whatever those songs
They possibly can

A cat at the door
Wanting to get in—
You sleeping beside me


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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (05-14-2011 01:18 PM).]

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1 posted 2011-05-18 01:15 AM


There is something about the "you sleeping beside me", the light on the carpet, the sparrows not singing that created a feeling of companionable silence inside me.

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