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caveat of love sip kreedow |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she had that goldie glow laughing eye sneak up on your sleepy kind of smile give you her best ol gator hungry too leave your bones exposed for her jiggle I was cashing rubber at a dead mans bank trading lies for maybe later candy bars my plastic was holy if in looks only but a little whollier than thous' account our jeans were just splinters over limbs and we made that saw dust bed into words that were too vulgar to whisper out loud so we said them backwards into the mirrors there was a tattoo on her tan shoulder dawn the size of my hand left in the sun too long and another one there on her inner thigh too she said it had my features and some smiling as my mind was just the ice she breast friended _____________ daark |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Hot, Dark, in more ways than one! Smiles. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks so much lady Owl.. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This one has so many FANtastic damn lines, when I started counting them I realized I would have to count the whole poem. Yep. "and some smiling." ~ Age and treachery will always overcome youth and skill. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks huge JP....I appreciate your reviews |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are the words' best friend, because you really make them dance. One like you, who is in such a privileged relationship with words, never needs to use vulgar words whether pronounced or read backwards in the mirror , because you can tap into the well of heavenly words like no other. And well, that's what you do!  Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady for your reads |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This sizzles, but as I was reading, I was thinking how good you are. Your poetry takes me to another place. I smell heat. I see images. I feel the sensuality. I feel wind or still hot air. You take me places with your poems -- and that is one of your gifts to me. Thank you, Dark Man. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...it is always fun to have you ...along thanks babe |
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