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Open Poetry #47

You Are Mist

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-05-13 11:08 AM

You are mist
on my mind
lingering low
curling up
from pools
of reflection
in my dawning
thoughts

You smile
my blush
and squirm
the impatience
on my mind

You are mist

LGR©5/13/11

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-05-13 12:16 PM

wow, Lori...this is really awesome...it's my new favorite of yours...fantastic job!

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-05-13 05:28 PM

Getting somewhat mystical here, Lori, and I like the atmosphere and the write.

~ Age and treachery will always overcome youth and skill. ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-05-13 07:40 PM

Smiling at you, my dear friend...

As you are becoming minimal,
I could make some suggestions...

but we'll have group soon...

maybe by then, I'll forget them!

LOL...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-05-14 10:24 AM

Clear visions seem impossible when great emotions play their accords.

Very nice, dear Lori.

Love,
Margherita

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2011-05-14 06:27 PM

This is light and tender and sweet to read.

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