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Lost In her Hazel
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Lost In her Hazel |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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When she looked at him he fell into her eyes getting lost in her hazel She gently took his hand and placed it upon her heart until he could regain his bearings LGR©4/27/11 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely delightful, dear Lori! I bet her heart also skipped a beat or two!  Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I''m afraid that only helped to muddle things, Lori. What on earth could you have been thinking? (evil laugh) ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dammit, my comment didn't show on your poem. ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Margherita,thanks for your sweet comment!Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry just be patient, hit refresh and wait a bit. Oh but what ever do you mean "what was I thinking" (batting eyelashes innocently) Lori |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Getting lost in someone's eyes is a spell hard to recover from. A most lovely place to be, I'm sure |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I was not cool enough to 'get it' (hazel reference, i.e.) until I read it...cool write |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh darling people.... this is one of the things I enjoy most about our Lori.... she shares "hazel" eyes.... wouldn't you love to live within hugging distance of one of your favored poets? I do!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful my friend, though I wonder if he'll ever regain his balance... j. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is lovely, Lori...enjoyed it much! i'm happily hazel myself There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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