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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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each day he did wait for the beauty to appear reincarnation ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful, Jerry. I don't know whether the reincarnation was of him or the beauty or the seabird - nor whether the him, the beauty and the seabird were 3 separate entities or whether 2 or 3 of them were one and the same - but whatever - the poem remains beautiful. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank Owl. Now I'm confused too. ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Waiting for her to come back as a beautiful bird...Fantastic Jerry! Loved it! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. That was it, Lori. Thanks. ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now why was I thinking "fish" and "breakfast"?  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Cause you're hungry maybe? Thanks anyway, Sunshine. ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful, dear Jerry. It is so comforting when something or someone gives us the feeling of that ethereal touch which reaches through time and space. Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That is sweet of you to say, Margherita , and I can't thank you enough . . . ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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