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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-01-14 10:13 AM

you did that thing again with your eyes
where you placed them above nonchalant
elbows leaning on each side of heavenly
perhaps the gateway to heaven or hell

depending on how bad it hurt to quit later
when the wanting was more of an addition
and you threw in the other assets you had
just to make sure I would be crushed under

I knew you loved looking down at my expression
as I slowly disappeared from your view
when you closed your eyes and said god yes
and other words I couldn't mention there

you tapped your fingers on my wrist then
and asked where my mind was spending time
then your bare thighs whispered my name again
as you crossed over from your ladylike

and asked if I would like to join you there

______________

daark (the prime is a pretty well toasted dinner house just up from the beach in ventura)
http://www.primesteakvc.com/

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-14-2011 11:15 AM).]

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-14 10:55 AM

Uh huh. Prime all right. The dinner bell has struck once again, no slackers need pretend to attend. Whispering thighs and quid pro quo the specialty tonight.

"Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife"

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-01-14 10:58 AM

jp...it is one of the best dining spots around the area, the watermark is a bit more pricey but not any better..true story number 468..thanks guy

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-01-14 11:41 AM

Yea ok, that's good. I'll have what you're having.

Rare form, D~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-01-14 11:58 AM

babyblue..hmmmm sounds like you have been there..thanks babe

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-01-15 12:17 PM

great opening line...nice smooth writing!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-01-15 08:38 AM

thanks faith

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2011-01-15 01:10 PM

I don't know how you can be so good at being bad!

"then your bare thighs whispered my name again
as you crossed over from your ladylike

and asked if I would like to join you there"

Gosh ol darnit hubba hubba ding ding.....There I'm alright now......

Great emotional split in this, loved it man!!

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2011-01-16 07:41 AM

et....thanks amigo

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