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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-04-23 09:51 AM


'you're an angel'
I told her time and again
she'd smile
say, did'ja ever wonder why
daytime thoughts are not the same
as nighttime ones?


she'd stare at me
waiting for an answer
giggling
then, I mean our baser instincts come out
at night

'cause it's night,' I'd say

a frown on her beautiful face
told me I'd said something wrong
she was easily offended
not for long though
she'd smile, lay dreamily
on the bed and raise a knee

she liked Bill Cosby and Robert Culp
on the old "I Spy" show
see! she'd remark
who says the races can't get along?
I didn't point out
they were just acting, cause
she'd have said, then the world should act

she smoked
hated herself because she couldn't quit
long before
the surgeon general told us to
she'd blow smoke rings
beg me to blow a smoke penis to penetrate

she loved sex
her idiosyncrasies were titillating
wanted to know
you really like that, huh?
what could I say
nothing, so I just grinned

when everyone else
was going the pantyhose route
she refused
said, it's not as much fun taking them off
after about six months
she went back to her husband



~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-23-2011 11:55 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-04-23 11:51 AM


that was bad a** my friend.  Your ending a Wow Jerry, way to go, yeah buddy!
Lori

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2011-04-23 12:59 PM


It's known that angels come in many disguises. Can't say she wasn't there when needed though.  

Helen

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-04-23 01:00 PM


That's more or less how I took it, Helen. Thanks much for the comments.

~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-04-23 06:31 PM


Ah, thank you Lori. I missed you earlier. Sorry . . .

~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-04-23 06:33 PM


I hate it when my comments won't come up.

~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~

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