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My Children... |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY 
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It starts off with Hannah Yes, Hannah- patient, smiley and sweet but don't let that fool you she is quite the "drama queen" on to HerisJoe with the interesting name the exact opposite of Hannah always the prankster who loses his cool, but he'd never let anyone hurt his mommy then on to Victoria the loud and funky- girly tomboy you'd never notice her tender heart whilst she plays ball and looks for bugs lets not forget Ryan and Bryan Ryan, who'd argue with a brick wall if he though it was wrong the leader if you will also the animal lover and Bryan, the peace maker always helpful and smiling but beware, his patience has limits and his temper, is quite something next is Tairena, she needs not your attitude hers alone is enough but she'd cry right next to you when you're suffering or in pain theres Reno or "Reno boy" as he prefers I swear he has enough energy to power up the world always running and jumping our "energizer bunny" theres Bandasar father's brother's son he lives with us now and we love him so theres J.J - Joshua Jacob with golden locks that curl born two months too early with such a tenacious will finally theres Reena with her lovely smile and pretty curls, my little "Pookie" who absolutely adores books My precious babies whos "booboos" I've healed with kisses and hugs exquisite children which I love and cherish I've watched them grow and helped them along first steps and first words birthday parties, stayed with them when they were "under the weather" while mommy and daddy were quite busy at work Now, truth be told I didn't "do the deed" or even "hatched the egg" but they are as much mine and they are their mom's and dad's ---------------------- on a side note: I don't actually have any biological kids, but these are the kids I took care of, some from birth, others along the way, but I truly feel like they are apart of me. When they're hurt, I feel their pain. When they're sick, I care for them. Usually while their mommys and daddys are at work. I've lived under the same roof (at some point in time) as all the children listed in this piece. Theres a closeness, a togetherness in my family, one that I cherish. Hannah- Sibling Herisjoe- Sibling Victoria- Niece Ryan and Bryan- Nephews Tairena- God-daughter Reno- God-son Bandasar- Cousin turned Brother (its complicated ha.) J.J- Nephew Reena- God-daughter Thanx, truly....for making it all the way down here.  -Trina |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
What a wonderful expression of love, Trina. I was wondering what was going on, thinking at first this was the resurrection of some sixties' communal experiment, but as I kept reading I had it figured out by the time you decided to explain yo'self. Family. Wonderful. "Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sinz...that sweet heart of yours is showing again..sure looks nice on ya..enjoyed it lady |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for sharing this side of yourself with us...makes you just that much more amazing. Lori |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
that's the most interesting and pleasant genealogical tree I've ever seen...nicely done |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Oh how much I enjoyed this. As a mother of six I was just reading along and thinking "this does not fit my impression of Trina". I finished and smiled because along the way I too took care of neighbor’s children, and later my grandchildren. It is amazing how much a neighbor's child or a child in school where I once volunteered and even some of the Sunday school kids I taught many years ago, or the young cub scouts I supervised, all grab hold of a notch in the heart and stay forever. Yes, I really did enjoy this and the explanation gave me a nice picture of you as the nurturer. Thank you, latearrival |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Trina This is just simply a wonderful render of your fine heart and good character. Really superb! I bet they're all beautiful too. Eric Love does not look after it's own interests. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I began to wonder how a young thing like you could have that many children... You're a blessing to them! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautiful...touching and sweet, I`m so glad you have such great capacity for love! Some find it difficult to `love` any children but their own..=( I am sure you have blessed their lives as much as they have yours. Family is such a gift, isn`t it?  Amaryllis |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
lol Yeah, family is wonderful. Thanx for looking in Jerry DS, is it?  Thanx.Lori, Thanx a bunch. Steavenr lol Thanx. aww, Thanx LateA. Yes. They are absolutely beautiful. Thanx Eric. lol I figured someone would wonder about that. Thanx Sunshine I don't understand how it would be difficult to love any child, thats a sad thing. Yes, Family is a gift. Thanx Amaryllis -Trina |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..>>you must be a very responsible young lady; i much enjoyed reading..>>spiros |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
They are lucky children to have you in their lives, Trina. Ida |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Aww, Thanx Spiros. Ah, but I am more blessed cause I have them, Thanx Ida. -Trina |
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