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my Breton beach
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my Breton beach |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The sea will continue to rock the white sand Rocks will still be sentinels When the centuries will have slowly passed On my courtship with too beautiful girls, I shall have died for a long time regrettably And the house white with squat fishermen Who sold on Sundays any sorts of ice creams Will have disappeared too of stony roads As my memories looking like waves so early come so early left in the dressed light Of a summer when on the sand everybody raves Not to take seriously the lived things, But right now it is necessary to continue to write and To love because the sea when I shall not be any more there Will continue to erase on the sand other steps Disappearing too from my fullfilled wishes As a Breton beach subjected to the plays of sky. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love this, Yann - the beautiful images, and the interesting perspective of future nostalgia! Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I am suprised this has only one comment, it is really a wonderful write. I agree whole heartedly with Owl about imagery and the unique perspective. I enjoyed it very much. Lori |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh my, dear Yann!! Your words pierce my heart and it swells with tears of understanding. Awesome write and especially wise and beautiful conclusion! Tu as touché mon coeur! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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