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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-13 02:19 PM

since then i've
gladly come to know
you cry, as do i,
at sad shows and your
fantasy life is
as rich as mine

i suspect we've
both wondered what
if we were curious
enough to try our
dreams on for size

since then i've
gladly come to know
you will not harm me
nor judge me for
the things that
i have done

and when i say
let us go slowly now
for once you've done
a thing regrettably
you can't undo it
you understand, nod
your head and say
'sure baby, i'll try'

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-13 02:25 PM

Don't quite understand the "regret" part, but maybe it was just the hesitatingly pause before the answer was given. At any rate, seems things are on an even course.

"Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife"

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-01-13 02:28 PM

kewl slice of fragile caution ms...brittle gingerbread

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-01-13 02:30 PM

thanks for gracing my page with your presence...i always enjoy what you have to say...as for the question of regret...timing is everything in most cases

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-01-13 02:36 PM

Thanks, Dark...i understand the first part but please tell me what the brittle ginerbread means...i don't get it...ok?

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-01-13 03:02 PM

ms faith..even though you know it is brittle, you still want to pick it up and taste it..

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-01-13 03:12 PM

Thanks, Dark...i appreciate you responding so quick...i've got it now

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2011-01-13 06:42 PM

"since then i've
gladly come to know
you will not harm me
nor judge me for
the things that
i have done"

...for me...this is the grace of maturity in a relationship...loved the write...lot of depth...completely and thoroughly enjoyed

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-01-13 07:53 PM

i am honored by your wonderful comments. Thank you so much!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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