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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-04-11 12:13 PM

it started with a stolen glance
then two, three and maybe four
somehow, even then i knew
we were linked forever more

even though the physical attraction
was very strong indeed
i felt our souls connecting
as you sat down next to me

there was a sparkle present
in your engaging eyes and
i felt a kind of happiness that day
that i had not felt in years

they say that love is patient
and they say that it is kind
so i kept my love a secret to keep
from interferring in your life

it didn''t matter that you loved another
for i knew that in the end i would win
one day you would be mine
it was only a matter of time

you said that i was special and
you had feelings for me too
when you said you loved me
my long held dream came true

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

1 posted 2011-04-11 12:55 PM

Oh wonderful! Love is patient, and you were and look were it got you! I really liked
this, it was sweet, & flirty.

Dreamgal

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

2 posted 2011-04-11 02:10 AM

This is heart-touching! I enjoyed it very much. I'm glad to hear that love worked out the way you wanted.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-04-11 03:14 AM

Thank you both for your lovely comments. I appreciate your stopping by and responding to my poem.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-04-11 08:50 AM

Faith- the love is so sweet in this poem! Enjoyed!
Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2011-04-11 08:51 AM

I especially like your opening stanza...wonderful!!

j.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-04-15 10:25 AM

Thank you both very much

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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