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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-04-08 01:56 PM



BOND
31 March 2011

The sun’s glance captured
in early morning window
reflection's embrace

Owl

© Copyright 2011 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2011-04-08 06:19 PM


A warm bond it is, dear Diana.

Very lovely!

Love,
Margherita

faithmairee
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2 posted 2011-04-08 08:13 PM


yes, very lovely...nice work as always

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

jwesley
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3 posted 2011-04-08 08:39 PM


Very well expressed...how true!

j.

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4 posted 2011-04-09 12:37 PM


Sometimes the most beautiful poetry is the most simply written.  I love good haiku for this reason and yours is good.  Thank you.

Alison

dreamgal
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5 posted 2011-04-09 12:46 PM


I love few words, there meaning is very powerful usually, such as this is.

Thanks for sharing,
Dreamgal

OwlSA
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6 posted 2011-04-09 07:15 AM


Thank you, Margherita.  Smiles.

Thank, you, Faithmaree.  I am glad you liked it.

Thank you, Jimmy.  Smiles.

Thank you, Alison.  I am honoured, especially in the light of your excellent haikus.

Thank you, Dreamgal for your kind words.

Owl

steavenr
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7 posted 2011-04-11 11:30 AM


...makes me want to go back to bed, wake up early and make a fresh pot of coffee cream & sugar?
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2011-04-11 12:25 PM


What a lovely meditative moment! Thanks! I needed that!

Love you!
Linda

OwlSA
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9 posted 2011-04-11 01:33 PM


Thanks, Steaven - yes, cream and 2 sugars please!

Thank you, Linda.  Smiles.  I am glad it was what you needed.

Owl

2islander2
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10 posted 2011-04-12 01:46 AM


such a bond, Owl, this is moving and accurate. enjoyed a lot.

yann

OwlSA
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11 posted 2011-04-15 04:51 PM


Thank you, Yann.  Smiles.

Owl

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