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Wishes and needs |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Birds fly together straight to the tree standing high above the lowly one, me sure of its beauty, its majesty, and its indomitable will. Sunk in the sand for many a year it's a tree to harvest adoring stares and gather the wishes and needs of each and every sightseer. No wonder it grows tall, taller than me, it's full of the most delightful things because I know of my wishes and needs they are outstandingly grand. I don't worry that trees hold my needs but I wonder sometimes how they will appear after the decreed and inevitable biodegradable process. Who will know that they're mine? Helen / 6 April 2011 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... Universe, no less than Universe, will know, dear Helen! This is a delightful poetic work, deeply enjoyed it. Love, Margherita  |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
As always, a great write, enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Dreamgal |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thoughtful and well expressed write my friend...says much. j. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"No wonder it grows tall, taller than me, it's full of the most delightful things because I know of my wishes and needs they are outstandingly grand. I don't worry that trees hold my needs but I wonder sometimes how they will appear after the decreed and inevitable biodegradable process." I loved these two stanzas (each for different reasons.) This is one cool write. |
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