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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2011-04-03 05:54 PM



Letting you in, deep into my heart
Now I'm on my knees falling all apart.
I close my eyes,
ignoring all these goodbyes.
Can you see these tears I cry,
lost somewhere nearby.


When I look back,
I wanna break this soundtrack.
Lately, its played after tear I've cried,
How can we say that we tried.
Can you see these tears I cry,
lost somewhere nearby.

All these heartbeats of mine,
somehow get lost in time.
I know not much is left,
but it feels like theft.
They stole your heart from me,
and I can't say I agree.

All I ever wanted,
was for you to not feel daunted..
To not get lost on your journey,
I'll still pray every day on bended knee.
Because all I have left to cope,
is hope.

© Copyright 2011 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2011-04-03 10:13 PM


Kellie, child, you're growing. Its evident.
There is strength in you...and you will
more than prosper. You'll survive!


Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2011-04-04 03:42 AM


Its hard losing someone to cancer, and not being able to be there the way you'd like to.
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2011-04-04 02:19 PM


It is hard losing loved ones, to disease or malaprops or whatever. A goodwrite of trying to work through t, and for you and for all of us I hope things get better.
katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
4 posted 2011-04-04 07:26 PM


This is so sad but a nice tribute.
Kat >^..^<

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