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Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2011-03-30 02:23 PM

The plumed sky
cooed,
as thoughts of things
everything, you

rushed…

in slow motion,

as the blink
of your glance
brushed
my cheek,
and the crimson cream
lips
you wore
washed, over me
dry,
drinking the pain
that fell
from my
eyes
as all things
that ever weren’t,
born onto
another
melted,
into steel and noise.

Like a seed,
on a fruitful journey
supplanted,
on a palm of wind
these clouds
of us,
that climb up the
ropes
of sky
born, of fire
and flurry,
they drain
the first drop
of flood
that suffocated
the rain
on a desert of
duration
shared together
from a glimpse,
across a page
that connects
two halfs, of
a smile
two halfs
of a whisper,
two
halfs
of a rainbow
that never
met beneath,
the sheets
of
mist.

Our, earth
is a heartland
of love and stones
and naked fingers,
we can ever
touch
but always
not have,
except
in that place
squeezed tight
where thoughts
of us
press out
light
and dreams of pearls
that hug your
teeth,
form diamond
drops
inside
that bleed, in
white.

This world
is blue,
for a reason.

It’s dying of
thirst
and cannot
breathe,
her briny waters
tears
of a cosmos,
that fell
on her pebble
frozen,
in lastingess
when inception
was still
afraid of the dim,
and thought, laid idle
on a silken
shore
of sinless,
beginnings.

This ocean
of space
of ink in waiting,
for a, unity of verse
to be written in the void
by fates that wish,
and not for prophet
soothsayers
of divinity, and kismet
on the warmth
of your purity, glistening
and
whole.

Design
is the rider of manuscripts
mare,
that scrawled sonnets of
odyssey
across the braiile,
of our
antiquity.

As builders of nemesis
built star castles
out of caligraphy,
abode of confusion
that ate
the delusion
that we, would never
come,
that we
would never
get to see
and appreciate,
the romance
of
never knowing
never
touching,
never ever
even getting to
see,
the eyes
that blind our
heart
to all other,
because they have
melded
into ours
now,
sharing the same
vision
of the dream
of the dream,
that chose
to never wake.

As the raven
of devoid
flew through our morrow
carving the caws
on the sound,
of our
sorrow.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2011-03-30 08:10 PM

Sad and soulful is the feelings I get from this one. Nicely done!
Kat >^..^<

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-04-01 11:22 AM

What an intense reading experience, dear Richy!

You are filled to the brim with universal impulses that seem to dance in your mind and are put to paper in a very special choreography.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-04-02 12:55 PM

Your words run down the page like tears and pool into a beautiful poem, Rich.
Ida

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2011-04-03 04:44 AM

What can I say? Now this is "romance" at its best! I trailed the page and ended on a sigh - good thing though because it means that I know.

Helen

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2011-04-03 06:12 AM

Thank you Karen, your time and reviews mean a lot to me!

Richard

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2011-04-03 06:15 AM

Sweet Margy, I don't know what I'd do without you... you are the lip puckering triple sec of my margherita!!

Richard

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2011-04-03 06:16 AM

That was a very sweet thing to say Ida, thanks dear.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2011-04-03 06:18 AM

You always have Honey Helen, and you always will...

Thanks tons sweet friend.

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

9 posted 2011-04-03 05:06 PM

A rush comes over me as I read.

Such the throb of passion filling the
emptyness of what will never be, but visa your expression actually is .........

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2011-04-03 05:12 PM

((((EmmaRose)))))

Richard

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

11 posted 2011-04-04 05:50 PM

Richy, can you ever forgive me for letting your wonderful words get past me? Your style strikes a cord.

Lori

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2011-04-04 05:59 PM

Lol Oh Lori you're so cute

Thanks for the heartwarming sentiments, you made my day.

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