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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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0 posted 2011-03-29 08:05 PM


Your secret you told,
"it was the right thing to do"
but was it really,
did you have a clue?
That maybe it might,
shatter a life?
And break a heart in two?
You see I had this image
of him in my mind,
and image that was so pure,
and now its tainted
since you "unloaded"
its tainted for evermore.

Did you do it for me?
Or do it for you?
Did it help you to
feel a little more free?
Well, I wish I could say,
I feel the same way,
but thats not the case for
me today......

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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

1 posted 2011-03-29 08:11 PM


NOOOOOOO....The Secret, isnt about my hubby
poo, I think he's a great guy, I really do,
sometimes I think I reveal too much in my words im sure I do,
but thats part of it all,
to be true to the call,
its something i have to do....

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-03-29 08:19 PM


Whoever it is about, this secret, is nothing more than a version of backyard gossip that, sometimes in the name of "trying to clear the air" it muddies it.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

3 posted 2011-03-29 09:19 PM


Thanks your probably right jerry, thanks for your encouraging words.
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