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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-03-29 06:50 PM


i was your goddess once
(for a while)
forever on a pedastel
then disaster fell

no one could be
that wonderful
(little-earth-mother me)
then i fell

you say i could never
care as much as you do
i wonder how things
got to be so crazy

everything is not my fault
still i'll take the rap
but sooner or later
somethings gotta give

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

1 posted 2011-03-29 07:38 PM


Oh that is something we can all relate to at one time or another. Loved this, thanks
again for sharing.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-03-29 08:01 PM


Whoever coined the phrase, "Can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em" sure knew what they were speaking of.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-03-30 11:20 AM


dreamgal-Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks.  I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

JerryPat-So true, my friend.  Thanks for your comments.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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