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Dead End Chase
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since 2009-01-22
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0 posted 2011-03-29 03:48 PM



Don't hesitate to ask, you say
We've all been duped by that before
It never even crossed my mind
To check if you'd come for more
A fleeting feeling fights you back
Cuts away the shameless doubt
Rises from the desert ash
Its time we sort this conflict out
You are not, nor can you be
The visions in your mind
Those brushstrokes drip away, my friend
And when they're gone you'll find ...
That little voice inside of you
Is mine. It's mine. It's mine.
"Wake up, rise up," I'm screaming now
Your choices will define
Today and every day from here
Just as it has before
I'll stay here until you choose
You won't come back for more


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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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1 posted 2011-03-29 09:40 PM


Nice poem, I think you really conveyed alot of feeling in it. Thanks for sharing.
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