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steavenr
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0 posted 2011-01-11 11:21 PM



when silver threads of moonlight sheds
its glances gleamed o’er lovers’ lives
the rays of night shine soft and bright
illuming hearts of those who thrive

on tinseled silk of orb-lit strains
that melt the hearts to one of twain

as silver shreds of light embrace
the loves, the lives, the hearts in place

of night-rays interlaced
with star-spun sparkles of warmth

© Copyright 2011 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
faithmairee
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1 posted 2011-01-11 11:26 PM


another beautiful poem so well-written...i enjoy your work so much!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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2 posted 2011-01-12 08:07 AM


Tinseled silk. Love it. The title, the word play, everything. Well done. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-01-12 09:33 AM


Very elegant and captivating, dear Steaven!

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat
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4 posted 2011-01-12 10:39 AM


You really understand the wheretofore of poetry writing which tugs at the readers emotion and heartstrings. Gotta love it!

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

steavenr
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5 posted 2011-01-12 02:04 PM


faithm, I do so appreciate your kind reflections…you are very generous…thank you

Trina, I, too liked the phrase best (I had no title for a while, so I just took for it my favorite words from it)…but, I digress…thank you

Margherita, thank you for stopping by and reading…always count your opinions highly

JerryPat, many thanks for such high praise…you are far too generous…I am humbled

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