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Open Poetry #47

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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-03-23 03:41 PM

They were just two figures
A few millimeters before the ledge of the roof

They were just two of the same
Talking about the pains and vindications
That came from the days of sandboxes and sand castles
To the years of braces and having your heart skip a beat
When you saw someone pass in the hallway.

They were simply reminiscing
Of the years that came and gone
But they were in the Ôhere and nowÕ
The present for all to see

For they were just two figures
Conversing the universal language
The one that lets the bodies speak
With such candor
That the holes of the streets
Wept with such weep
They filled themselves
Until the sun rose

They were just a connection of the spirit
Of the constitution between two people
Letting their hearts skip beats
Like the twin peaks
That overshadowed the cities landscape

Then as dawn came
They stared,
The simplest of stares,
Where their eyes were so wide
The captions of the sky
Withdrew their faces for
Just one second

So they could be by themselves.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2011-03-23 09:48 PM

Well composed.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2011-03-24 04:55 PM

Thanks, Easy..take care

Cheers

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