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Open Poetry #47

wondrous love

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-11 10:34 PM

nothing here ever changes
my feelings remain the same
as you give your love to me
i shall give it back again

love is better than a drug
it forever makes me high
my love for you is endless
it merely intensifies

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-11 10:39 PM

Great scheme and wonderful rhyming, faith. Love this for its brevity and passion.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-11 10:42 PM

i am honored by your wonderful remarks...thank you

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-01-12 02:06 PM

the maturing of love, succinctly penned...enjoyed

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-01-12 02:09 PM

Much better than a drug and healthier if you can keep it together.
Although many will say love is the most powerful drug of them all!

Eric

Siamese twins move to England so the other one can learn how to drive!

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-01-13 03:29 PM

thank you both for your lovely comments

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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