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A Stirring |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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I am here beneath all this rubble, dirty black soot, barely breathing, my clothes stained, as my memory, The world ended, time has came and gone, ashes remain in this heart shaped box, where red velvet dreams were born, Today a glimmer of hope flickered, as the sun in the specks of your eyes, pieces of silver in green glittered, After all these days past, years, you still hold a small flame, now I know my tears cried, Were never in vain, you remember, you remember, my name.... |
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Anoo Member
since 2011-01-23
Posts 55UK |
I enjoyed your poem. I can relate it to a past experience.Great writing! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"After all these days past, years, you still hold a small flame, now I know my tears cried, Were never in vain, you remember, you remember, my name...." ...there's a pleasant ambiance that leads to a refreshing sigh (for me) in this...well done |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Heartfelt, enjoyed. Kat >^..^< |
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