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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2011-03-21 08:38 AM


    loneliness

desert-star infinity
distant coyote
true voice given
to loneliness

       --- b. e. adams (3/21/2011)

© Copyright 2011 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2011-03-21 10:40 AM


Yes, loneliness is deeply perceived, dear Bruce. But there is interaction here at least ... the one who utters the sound and the one who listens ... the connection is there.

Love,
Margherita

katahdin
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2 posted 2011-03-21 12:47 PM


Well done Bruce!!! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

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3 posted 2011-03-22 01:42 AM


You expressed this so well, Bruce.  Thinking of you because your poetry calls out for me to think ... of you.

Alison

steavenr
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4 posted 2011-03-22 10:47 PM


cool write...you could see and feel this...totally wow
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2011-03-25 11:23 AM


The loneliest sound so well written.
                             Ida

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2011-03-27 11:43 AM


YOu paint with words, dreampoet.
Your short verses are so vivid.

Great work!

Honeybunch
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7 posted 2011-03-27 02:36 PM


Bruce - you convey so much with so few words.  I felt this.

Helen

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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8 posted 2011-03-27 08:53 PM


To describe loneliness in 9/10 words is talent. Enjoyed.

-Trina
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ethome
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9 posted 2011-03-27 09:30 PM


Lonely picture painted with so few words.
Well done!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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