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Open Poetry #47

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2011-03-13 05:41 AM

You slam a door,
Two thousand birds
fly away,
tomorrow also.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2011-03-13 05:54 AM

Short and sweet! Nice!
Kat >^..^<

~*~ To live is to love, to love is to live ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2011-03-13 01:04 PM

Never can be sure if the door slammed
will boomerang. Who knows?
Good questioning evoked

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2011-03-13 01:14 PM

Short and 'tweet'! Sorry, Yann. I couldn't help myself!
Hopefully a love dove will remain tomorrow irregardless of how loud that proverbial door is slammed.

Linda

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2011-03-13 02:01 PM

thanks a lot kat for reading and commenting,

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2011-03-13 02:02 PM

thanks emma for the boomerang comment, it slammed my mind in a pertinent and kind way.

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2011-03-13 02:05 PM

thanks Linda, I was inspired by birds, a dove is a peace symbol that I cherish and may peace preserve the world too...Thanks for the delicious and original comment.

yann

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-03-13 11:11 PM

thought-provoking and very well written...i enjoyed it a lot, yann!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-03-14 11:01 AM

This is very wise, Yann. If only the whole world knew just this one truth, it would be a much better place.

Owl

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2011-03-14 12:52 PM

So wise and so true, yann.
Ida

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