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i envy the woman whose lips
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i envy the woman whose lips |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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i envy the woman whose lips your ample mouth has gently kissed whose very look enslaves your soul i ponder yet all i have missed i envy her still whose arms press you to her breasts so tenderly who shares your secret hopes and dreams and keeps your fire burning steadily i envy the woman whose bed your long lean body slumbers in forgive my heart*s dear love desires that which others consider a sin i envy the woman i don*t even know who possesses what i can only desire to be empowered by someone so fine i envy her body - her soul on fire There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Faith Bet she can't write a poem like you can. Some great lines in this as one who observes from a distance. Reminds me of the old song 'You Don't Know Me' "forgive my heart*s dear love desires that which others consider a sin" No way! Simple biological function. Eric Siamese twins move to England so the other one can learn how to drive! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Eric-Wow! That was fast. I just posted this one. Thanks for your wonderful response! I appreciate that! Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is a fiery piece of passion. Awesome. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Passion on parade here, faith. Our hearts, unfortunately do not always consult with us where it wants to lose itself. One look and we are smitten. Powerful poem. Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Xgarapanx-Thank you so much! I'm honored by your wonderful remarks. JerryPat-Thanks you! That means alot to me coming from you. I'm honored! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
as my father would say, "hotch o t" ...that and so very well written...nice job |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
ah, thanks so much...i'm pleased you enjoyed it! (smiles) There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
When you're hot, you're hot! Good one. Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Ah, thanks, Lori. I always enjoy your comments.  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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