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Kyoka..treelike
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Kyoka..treelike |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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**Note on Kyoka..kyoka are similar to tanka (five lines; first three lines set up the action; last two lines form a conclusion (often)..they are humorous though; sarcastic; ironic; dealing in wry humor; spoofs; fun ----------------------- Kyoka..treelike at the park he spreads arms high and bonds his legs more appendaged he becomes furling sleeves free leafy hair ---------------------------- ----------------------- ..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris ..mostly channeled; spirit Harmony |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such fantastic imagery, dear Spiros! Love, Margherita |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Margherita..>>thanks, i'm so pleased you read and commented.>>spiros ---------- -------------- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this! I can see it...a moment of madness in a nest of mayhem! |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thanks Sunshine..! you just defined "kyoka" s-o-o-o-o well..! ..spiros ----------- ------------------ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My dear friend, I might "see" it, but I don't know that I can write it like you do! I'll have to ponder I bit, I think! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done! Kat >^..^< |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Sunshine, you have your own beautiful style of writing which fully engages the reader.. ..Kat, thanks much for reading and commenting kindly.. ..spiros ---------- ---------------- |
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