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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-03-08 04:33 PM



Strutting down the street her feet encased in
Prada grey suede striped detail pumps
Her Italian leather bag clutched in one hand
Starbucks' Mocha latte in the other
She passes a tearful woman huddled
In the doorway of the building
Next to her office never thinking
How the woman could eat for the day
On what she paid for her usual
Morning pick me up beverage.

Meanwhile, overhead a corporate jet
Flies over a quickly filling tent city
Its occupants not knowing or caring
That some of their laid-off employees
Are below stretching canvas to provide
Shelter for their children who are
Now homeless and finally realizing
What the word foreclosure really means.

She'll stop on her way home for a
Drink with the girls, end up having three.
The execs in the corporate jet will
Be sipping Grey Goose vodka
While wondering who'll be laid off next.
Children in the tent city will go to sleep hungry.

In a blink Prada and Grey Goose
Will be stretching canvas next to the children
All the while wondering what in
The hell happened, while Starbucks
Goes belly up.


© Marcia Miller-Twiford


[This message has been edited by Word Weaver (03-08-2011 09:46 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-03-08 09:31 PM


In a blink, indeed. A friend and I were lunching today at a "dive", as we refer to it...north end, rednecks, cowboys and entrepreneurs who mix and mingle...

and the "in a blink" subject came up of many lives who have been changed recently, by accident, monetary or other mis-fortunes, and it doesn't really matter, then, whether you are Grey Goose, Prada, or boxed wine and Woolworth...

life will happen, and to those to whom we were referring? Their lives are only important to those that love them.

Thank you!

Word Weaver
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2 posted 2011-03-08 09:45 PM


I've seen it happen to several families. Not necessarily relegated to a tent city but losing their homes, jobs, way of life. And you're right, few if any care until it hits home. No pun intended. *S*


Nareena
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since 2011-02-17
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3 posted 2011-03-08 11:23 PM


I'm not quite in this particular situation, but I'm hoping that once I'm out of it, once life improves, I can remember this place and be a little more sensitive to others.
latearrival
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4 posted 2011-03-09 12:50 PM


you wrote it down exactly.Thanks, latearrival
faithmairee
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5 posted 2011-03-09 07:58 PM


Welcome to the blue room.  I hope you enjoy it here.

Great poem.  I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Spiros Zafiris
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6 posted 2011-03-10 04:39 AM


..well-written; captures the nightmare..spiros
Margherita
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7 posted 2011-03-10 09:25 AM


A well captured image of the impermanence of everything.

The materialistic mentality will lead us nowhere in constructing a more balanced society where everyone can lead a dignified life.

Such dramatic changes may induce to ponder!

Love,
Margherita

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