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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California
0 posted 2011-03-07 11:56 PM

I see a life in your eyes
I was distracted by what you wanted to say
My minds been lost for hours
Circling around you for now
Let everything come from my dreams
I keep trying to find out
Give me a hint
Let me know your name
Let me learn how to speak
You are in my eyes
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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
1 posted 2011-03-09 09:35 AM

I think more than your eyes have been
filled with this person. That comes through
in your words.
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