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Open Poetry #47
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sweetcheeks639
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since 2011-02-17
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0 posted 2011-03-04 09:47 PM


Listening to the raindrops fall
My mind begins to stray
Remembering how it felt that night
You took my breath away
To feel the rain fall on my skin
Will now bring memories
Of how it felt that special night
When you made love to me
© Copyright 2011 Laura Keating - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-03-05 06:00 AM

Great rhyme scheme Laura and a beautiful flow to this.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests
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