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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2011-03-01 09:15 AM



Dear Liz I is just wonderin where you is?
Ain't seen you since the snow storm last night
When you're not around nothing goes right.
Made my own coffee bacon and beans
Biggest kitchen mess ya ever seen.
When you're not here I get to feelin so blue
Got no one to talk to can't even tie my shoes
Ain't it the truth a man ain't got no life,
when left all alone with no darling wife.

Now I'm gonna search and see where you've gone
But I can't get anywhere there's so much snow on the lawn.

OH! There YOU are!!



Eric

the writer views a critic like a fire hydrant would view a dog

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-03-01 09:22 AM


Too cute! love the pic! I've see this picture before but it wasn't anything spectacular until you put your magic touch to it.
Great job Eric!
Lori

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2011-03-01 11:02 AM


Loved this, Eric!  Thanks for the laugh!

Helen

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2011-03-01 01:12 PM


Lori
Thanks for droppin in and having a chuckle.
I appreciate much.

Eric

___________________________________

Helen
Glad I got a laugh out of you.
That never hurts.

Eric

the writer views a critic like a fire hydrant would view a dog

faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-03-01 06:30 PM


LOL...love it, Eric...glad you found her

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
5 posted 2011-03-01 06:39 PM


YeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeHaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

~ Never did I feel more devoted to my wife than after biting the wild garlic of treachery ~

Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2011-03-01 08:00 PM


LOL...Eric, I didn't know what to think when I saw the title this morning...I'm glad I came back for the "look-see!"

You are so charming when you're in your teasing stage!




ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2011-03-02 09:17 PM


Hi Faith
Thanks for being here and commenting.
Smile

Eric

________________________________________

Jerry

You must be getting better.
Yeehaw!!

Eric

________________________________

He he Sunshine one.

The "teasing stage" has been fun when conducted properly.
Many thanks for the visit and the laugh.

Eric

the writer views a critic like a fire hydrant would view a dog

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