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Open Poetry #45
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Johan
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since 2009-05-13
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Lincolnshire, England U.K.
0 posted 2009-06-12 09:10 AM


A Valentine


In the silence as you sleep
I touch the warmth of your love
I bare my soul
With a butterfly kiss
I gently touch your pouting lips
You are a light
Within my darkness
I feel the comfort of your body
In the warmth of our bond
I have no pain.
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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-06-12 07:43 PM

Yo Johan,

This sounds good.  That's the way it should be.

Bobby
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2 posted 2009-06-12 08:54 PM

Dreamy,  and just so tender and full of love.

Very nice, Johan~  and welcome!
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3 posted 2009-06-13 11:54 PM

This is loving and lovely.  What a great partnership.

Alison
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