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Have Faith |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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Have Faith Yes, I know there are secrets, I watch them cripple you. I can feel your past weigh on you, a diligent thief stealing even when you smile. I can see the damage from the suffering life has dealt you. But, I am here now. Have faith in our dreams. Happiness sometimes, for some people, is not where your headed, but in what you leave behind. Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks yoinn for the poignant poem and sharing so deep feelings, the truth come from your poem and I admire that. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful and insightful, dear Tim. Intensely expressed. Love, Margherita |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you Yann. Faith and truth, how close they walk huh. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you dear Margherita for your kind words Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A little sad Tim but it does suggest the deep feelings that have gone into that poem. Well one my friend. Take care. Lindsay |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
GREAT philosophy! thanks for sharing |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Yoinn - I truly loved the last verse, and you said it very well... BC |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yo, yo... you know i'm feelin' this... and this is absolutely true: Happiness sometimes, for some people, is not where your headed, but in what you leave behind love ya,  berney don't wait for the storms to end~ |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thank you Lindsay. I think to properly place the joy into your life you must also acknowledge the sadness. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thank you martiniat8 for your kind praise. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Im glad you liked it Bill, thanks for the comments. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Glad you liked it berney, Yep, I try to let past stay in the review mirror and keep moving forward. right back at ya girl Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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