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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-07-17 04:58 AM



How quickly the winds can change
a trembling heart gets rearranged

when raindrops start to fall

stuck in a rut
pick up the pen
and begin again

with the muddy muse

write of simple things
a conversation
a memory

the obstacles
are just road debris
when...

you're here with me

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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-07-17 07:50 AM


You need some inspiration~

I hope that muse returns soon, and that pen burns holes in your paper! lol...

~ARH

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-07-17 10:35 AM


"stuck in a rut
pick up the pen
and begin again"

~ Yeppers! That's the ticket to being successful in life! ~ and to writing poetry!

Love that!!! I have to remind myself of those lines whenever I find myself in a writing rut! Thanks!

Right on! ~ Write on!


EA

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2009-07-17 01:19 PM


Oh how excellent is this!!

So good!

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
4 posted 2009-07-17 09:13 PM


thanks guys, I struggled with this and posted a different version elsewhere, guess i shouldve left it alone
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2009-07-18 04:58 PM


A shower that means renewal, I would say.

Love your thoughts here.

Love,
Margherita

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