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My Dear Mother
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My Dear Mother |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
This dream i dream Keeps coming back Making it harder and harder To go about the day Its tearing a hole In my heart Another spot lost with you My dear Mother This life holds no interest to me But I'll keep going on Daddy needs me I know I wake up each morning And place this smile On my face just for him I try and make him see I will be okay But I'm dyeing inside Every time I close my eyes I see your face And it kills me For I know I'll never see your Smiling face again Your beautiful blue eyes Filled with love The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made. |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Wow, words like bittersweet come to mind, love in the lines touch with healing and living for love to carry on, Bloodline, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The love that you have shown for both your parents is very compelling. You are a daughter to be proud of. In some ways, your mother will be even closer to you now. A beautifully expressed, heartfelt write. Keep putting that smile on your face. The time will come when it will be coming from the inside out. Giving you a warm, compassionate hug, Love & Everlasting Light, Earth Angel  |
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something meaningful Junior Member
since 2009-07-17
Posts 12Wisconsin, USA |
this poem is just wow. i can feel the love bursting from its words. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Life must hold some interest for you or you wouldn't have written this poem. Perhaps you don't know how much interest in life you have. I hope you have some so you will write more beautiful poems about it! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This made me cry knowing that my granddaughter must feel like this at times. She lost him mother when she was only 10. Keep writing, nehematala, Somehow it helps. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Michelle, yes love energy flows through your poem abundantly. You are brave in wanting to help your Dad, when you too are hurting so much. Poignant write. The soul connection goes on forever. Talk to her and you will sense her answers, her closeness, her loving presence. Love and comfort. Margherita  |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
Thanks I know the time should come when it gets easier but its been a little over 3 months and it keeps getting harder. But it doesn't help that important events and stuff that a teen should have there mother there for keep coming, it makes it so much harder. Sometimes I wish she was back but then I remember how much she suffered in the past three years. Thanks for all your support! The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made. |
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