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In Dream |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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In dark dreams therein lay truth’s biggest lie Where blessed joy with fervent bliss give way To thoughts of despair, entrapped by closed eyes Both equal and pure as night is to day Veiled horror at what was held, now lost Upon waking in morning’s bright new dawn To return to the dream at any cost Before all hope of a love shared is gone Then to learn that love was there all the while Its presence thy mind hath barely contained Exposed for what it is behind a smile And within, the source shall ever remain What, in depths of dark sleep from love lost brings? Such is love known by all these tell-tale things |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
What, in depths of dark sleep from love lost brings? Such is love known by all these tell-tale things That is a classic line. Enjoyed you, H |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~a true poet's heart~~in all you write...niiicely done~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Upon waking in morning’s bright new dawn To return to the dream at any cost ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Too true, and so very well told. A dream literally takes on a life of it's own. Always so nice to read you, guy~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Yes! You treat this dream topic with great poetic skill. Love, Margherita |
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